NAC Judge
I'm not a fan of the dry recording of your voice. Voice needs to have some kind of chorus of reverb in my opinion, or it just rubs my ears wrong. Every imperfection is enhanced when you don't do this. As a result, your voice sounds very rough in this piece and the lack of quality distracts from the other very creative things are you are doing here. I liked the beat idea, it works. Lyrics tell a story that actually mean something, good to hear. Agh but then there are pops and clicks too in your voice recording again. Your mic, is it mounted properly? Its pleasing that you know how to harmonize somewhat too.
Overall good idea, crappy implementation. Score: 5